yashwa001
Hi ... I am impressed by your story line... It is not like maochism and sadism concept in which ml will torture fl for straight 3 yrs... And fl will get a terminal disease or in an accident... Ml will come to know the person he loves the most is the fl and say sorry to her and fl will forgive him .. and they will be a happy ending..
Every story is like this.. but seeing ur storyline i am very impressed...where u have made fl as a confident decivise person not like a door mat..ml is a sensible person not like a proud peacock...the highlight is the fl is willing to accept him in the second life since he hasn't done harm to her... I can feel the love and trust building in them along the story....
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