Okay, I need help! I'm debating writing a new story after Hulahoop and I finish MOFPC, but I want to know whether or not it sounds interesting, so I'm going to post a preview below:
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Blood-it's everywhere-coating the ground and cement walls in a thick, sticky mess of betrayal and destruction. Eldrin Street was silent. Bereft of all the noise and colorful life the bustling city street once had. Instead it stood silent, stained with the remains of the victims of a mad man's revenge. Hundreds of people's innocent lives had been lost as collateral damage, but mercy is a beautiful lie when you're being hunted by a serial killer.
Some people say that it is never too late to save someone's soul-some people are wrong. The fact is, there comes a point of corruption and insanity that can't be cleansed. A madness that is beyond repair, let alone salvation. Axel James was not just among the unhinged, he was their master; as wicked as they come and twice as intelligent.
They say he was a child prodigy, 'the next Einstein,' etc. What they didn't realize, was that matching every stroke of brilliance, two-to-one, madness lay simmering just beneath the surface, waiting to reveal itself. To this day, no Earthly has ever caught him; which is exactly where I come in.
My name is Viria Daveen, and I'm not your average detective. In fact, there's nothing average about me in Earthly standards at all, because I'm not human. I'm Angelic, a Fallen Angel to be more precise, and I've come to save the Earthly from Axel's wrath.
Sure it sounds easy, but there's one problem I wasn't counting on. Axel isn't entirely human either. In a twisted turn of events, it turns out, he's half Vordecai Demon, and he knows I'm on his tail. The problem? He's determined to take the Earthly down with him, and he's doing a flawless job of it. I need to eliminate him before the entire species is wiped extinct, because if I don't, the Guardian Angels in Heaven lose their power, and we all die with them.
