Jean2020

@Jean2020 No, I should be the one thanking you, for honestly telling me what my mistake was. I like honest critic, even though it hurt sometime. In my defense for the fact that my grammar suck, I say that I'm still and ESL student and has only known english for like..3 years. My birth language grammar is a whole lot different than English. I'll use check software nextime.
          
          ---Thx
          -Sylvia

@SylviaDablo  thanks for replying to my comment. I'll be sure to read more when u write it. 

Oh! and this was set a few years in the future, and there's never was a Dylan or those stuff from book 7 Angel, I draft this before the book was even heard of, so yeah. ;D

Hey! i see u read my TLF book.. Thanks alot for commenting Jean, I'm sorry about the swearing also. It's just seem more realistic that way to me :). I mean, The Flock doesn't technically live in school and a ''nice'' neighborhood. And since they mostly live on the street, It doesnt seem rite if they dont swear. I'll try and watch it nxt time though.
          
          ---THX FOR READING
          --Sylvia

Thanks for the comment! It meant a lot. I was going for a similar style, so I'm happy it was recognized. :)
          A new chapter's coming soon, so make sure to keep reading! :D

Thanks for the comment! It meant a lot. I was going for a similar style, so I'm happy it was recognized. :)
          A new chapter's coming soon, so make sure to keep reading! :D

Thanks for the comment! It meant a lot. I was going for a similar style, so I'm happy it was recognized. :)
          A new chapter's coming soon, so make sure to keep reading! :D

Thanks for the comment! It meant a lot. I was going for a similar style, so I'm happy it was recognized. :)
          A new chapter's coming soon, so make sure to keep reading! :D

Thanks for the comment! It meant a lot. I was going for a similar style, so I'm happy it was recognized. :)
          A new chapter's coming soon, so make sure to keep reading! :D

Thanks for the comment! It meant a lot. I was going for a similar style, so I'm happy it was recognized. :)
          A new chapter's coming soon, so make sure to keep reading! :D