@echapmanstories Don't expect much XD I'm still new to writing fiction. I'll start reading now. I know this is too much to ask: if you like, you can try reading first the INTRO/(S); they are part of the main plot, and I guarantee, it's worth to read.
And BTW, I've checked your book's 1st chapter. I'm loving it already---the descriptions are vivid---and the chapter itself is long! I love reading long chapters :)