Jeanie_M

why you  Delete Living with 5 teenage boys.. It was so good

Hey you should read my story yeah ill share ours if you share mine??? It's called I Have A Dream.
          Please and thank you

@Steph_Love101 I followed you!!! Can you please read my fanfic and tell me if its good?

@kissofmidnight OMG CONGRATS GURL

I GOT TO 1,000 READSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

@imabitchxx thank you that doesn't sound dumb. I'll go do it right away!! Thanks for the help!!(:

Hmmm.. well what I'd do it just reread it a few times so then you can kinda get a feel for it and this is gonna sounds dumb but like ask yourself important questions about the story like you're a reader... I do it all the time :$ but that way you kinda make sure that no one is left with like important questions about the story and no one is getting confused. Sorry if that doesnt make any sense :$$ and also just mention to your readers that you tweaked the first chapter a bit so they can maybe go reread it as well! :) x

@imabitchxx thank you so much!!(: and yeah I know what you mean I just don't know how I could explain it since I already pasted that part in the story. You know? Xx

Hey sweet pea! Remember me? Well I've read the beginning of your story and i think it has plenty potential! :) I do agree a lot with the user who posted on your first chapter though. It moved so quickly and I think you need to explain just a bit more so it makes more sense and is more realistic. But otherwise, you're doing awesome love :) xo

@kissofmidnight Teehee idk lolz!!