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Can you please give my story a read. I'm currently working on it , so can you please read it and tell me whether I should continue working on it or not. And will you please tell me if there's a mistake in it. If you do that , that'll be awesome. <3
          https://my.w.tt/kltGgprfvY

          PLUG!
          
          kailangan nyo ba ng cover ng inyong mga libro? kung oo, why not fill up the form in my graphic book? i will assure na magugustuhan nyo yung outcome ng request nyo! 
          
          https://my.w.tt/UiNb/S3HN3RIL0N