Jebet

Are you still active????

I have over 300 reads on my story this is so awesome... I don't know if you know this but your support means so much... Thank you for the love no matter how big or small.. Much love☺

@asrithaasri26 no problem!☺

@jackrichardjones no problem

I have rewritten my book, please check it out and tell me what you think.

Hi I just have a few thing to tell you, please note that you need to use better punctuation in your book. Also, when a person speaks have that be its own paragraph. Another thing hun, don't forget commas when doing a little list. Don't forget the commas. Commas are very important. I will be doing a writing tips book very soon. Please wait. It will be out February 1, 2018. Remember this is constructive criticism. :)

Hiiii! I normally don't make requests like this, but I was wondering if you would be willing to do a read for read! I promise to leave honest and positive feedback on your book, if you will do the same to mine! 
          
          Ik these can be rather rude requests, so don't be afraid to say no XD I understand lol. Anyway, I hope I didn't bother, and I have a wonderful day! 

To the person who gave me a star, thank you ♥

"I got this at the same time as her, we got them when," she began to hesitate a bit, then she began smiling, " when we decided we wanted to do more than just live we wanted the secret to life. Do you know the secret to life?" I shock my head," No, well the secret to life is death."
          "What!" I unintentionally exclaimed. She began to laugh.
          
          Check out the the rest in the latest chapter and read the previous chapters if you haven't yet. 

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