hey sweetheart!
thanks so much for taking the time to look at my story! i haven't gotten much time to write lately but i'm glad others like you are. your story is very good so far! you should continue to write it and see where it ends up, and possibly even write more after that. if anything i'd consider adding a little summary to go along with it. this might attract even more readers so they know what to expect when stumbling upon it! you can only get better at writing and i hope you achieve!
- Alexa