codyd2
The story was clear to me because I understand what it is about, but what I don't understand is that you haven't add the reason of the robbery.
The dialogue in the story did not make the characters come alive because I didn't know which ones were talking.
The sequence of events were clear to me because you have explained the events clear.
It is a good story but it is not my style because I like the spies or military stories that are kinda related.