@JeffreyBolden, i will get back to u, just been hectic and weekends i have only my mobile which really is a drag. I must just say i'm not qualified in any way to critique writing at all. I just love poetry and give my own opinion. Just thought i should clear that up. I like your poetry and i think u are talented, but the competition is tough. U seem really dedicated and focussed. Just never stop writing. Never.