Jeffs_insanity

Hey.. I was just wondering if someone could give me pointers on editing my stories. I'm really struggling and I want to make the few people who do read them happy..

Hey guys. I know I'm not that popular but... I was wondering if I should go back and reedit my story into 3rd person instead of first. I think it will help others to understand the story but... I don't even know if people are reading this... So... Yeah.. tell me what you think