JehanSalim

Okay I lied I didn't put up the latest chapter in an hour because I dozed off. But yeah for reals chapter 3 part A is up now, enjoy!

JehanSalim

Chapter 3 part A finally completed writing. Now in the long process of re-editing through it. Here's an un-edited sample of the first paragraph:
          
          It has been a week since the events that transpired that one night which was a lot to take in for Black Heart and the fact he had gone through Dr. Cerupote’s appointment had made him dazed for a while. A week is all it took for the kahunore to recover from that process. While the side effect on the first and second day has him staggering a lot which would make him in no state to be walking around and he spent those days just laying down in the bunk room. Rat-Tooth checks on him every now and then. By the third day he managed to be stabilized but communication was difficult and he spent most of his time between dazed and focused. By almost the end of the next week Black Heart was fully recovered from the procedure.

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Finally after so long I have posted chapter 2 part B (which is so long I split it in half and also because they have a 20 image limit boo) But yeah if you haven't yet the chapter has been up I repeat the chapter has been up!

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Chapter 2 Part B is slow progress but here's an un-edited excerpt from the first page:
          It felt like ages dragging the bodies of his “work colleagues” physically. Halfway through his journey back to the Brotherhood Den he felt his energy draining using his powers gave out and he had to drag each member by hand. They were heavy but he managed to drag them to a nearby broken down lamp post that happens to be near the entrance of the entrance of the Den. He laid their unconscious bodies against the post, he checked their pulses. They both have a pulse to his relief, earlier he wondered if he went too far beating both of them up too hard. But then dread filled his head, his hands trembling at the very thought of if those two woke up and tell on Alpha Jack to what he did to them. Black Heart was very sure those two Brotherhood members have taken a brief look at him before he punched them both their lights out. But now the kahunore paced back and forth thinking how he can explain himself if his “colleagues” were to wake up.
          “Yuh leave a few hours and I come back to see yuh wit two of our own all beat up. What didya do this time kid?” drawled a rough sounding voice that does not have any tact