Hi! I like your story; the narrative style works really well for it. I'd love your opinion on mine, if you ever have the time :)
Hope you're having a lovely day!
~ cratur
Thank you for the comment you gave on my story. I’d be glad to have my opinion on yours as well, but I’m not a very good critic :) I appreciate you for taking your time and gave me a small advice, I’d definitely use it. Thanks