Jeqal Jeqal

I’ll revisit it. I wasn’t sure what she had a choice of. I needed a third option. 
            Both men are engaged. Neither have expressed an interest in her. 
            Turning down a large venue where she could network and possibly grow her business seemed odd. 
            I don’t call a person I’ve never been physical with a boyfriend. I call them a friend. I don’t think a friend can leave you for another woman. They can choose to be with someone they want a relationship with that includes physical. Now he’s engaged. People do drift away when they’re in relationships. That’s life. 
            With this guy as a template was Marcus also a non physical ‘boyfriend’ who wound up ghosting her and dating other women. 
            It’s been five years she really needs to move on. 
            Option 3 would be a fully functional adult male who lets her know what he wants. The non triangle triangle with guests was confusing. The conflict for me is: why is she not seeing this for what it is and move on. Why are her girlfriends in the same loop as her? 
            I guess I need a reason for this to not be abnormal. 
            5 years is a long time to pine for someone who ignored you, has moved on, and has his own issues. 
            The ex roommate seems to be the catalyst and maybe the only one who knows what’s going on. 
            I’ll have to see the tags you used. I’m not sure why I found it. 
            
            Thanks for asking my feedback. I’ll be driving tomorrow to visit family so be patient. In the meantime if you want to ask specific questions. I’ll give feedback but maybe it’s not your book but your tags.  
            From what I’ve read so far I’m not sure where it fits. Women reading romance generally don’t want the lead going after men who are taken. 
            Maybe this is more literary in tone and explores the inner workings of a woman who is frittering away her youth, but is also successful. It’s almost like a coming of age story except she’s fully adult and out of university for some time. 
            

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@JeqalJeqal hello, it's been a minute. I didn't get the notification for this reply. Wattpad is not very reliable on the notification front, lol. Hope you're well. I've been writing books where the main characters regret their life choices ☺️

Yw!  Still new to this section. Love getting ideas for regret reads. 

Yw

I see all your comments on 7 days so I don’t think you’re blocked.  The comments are messed up on Wattpad. Eventually it should get straightened out when someone realizes it’s not a cache issue 

Why were you blocked?

What genre are you considering yourself? Fanfic Fantasy?

My drain is fixed at least. 

@JeqalJeqal, this certainly makes me see you in a new light