wynslyxie

Thanks for reading and voting my nocel. What you think of the first chapter so far?

wynslyxie

@wynslyxie okay thank you thank you!
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JesTanis

@wynslyxie Maybe the genre of my story won't attract (or please) you immediately, but you will have a well-constructed romance in the end. You will notice that I am intense in emotions (and there will be no naughty things, I don't like that). A pure and innocent love, however... well constructed. Thank you very much indeed!
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JesTanis

@wynslyxie Hello, sorry for the delay!
            I found your writing simply fascinating. You mix emotions with the landscape and everything is very easy to visualize. The part that says that Eyla was a writer who liked to send her characters to another world says a lot about you. It's as if it were breaking not only the 4th wall but the 5th. In other words, a character who appears to be the author, where he doesn't know he is the author but is a character... author... HAHAHA
            I thought that was simply brilliant on your part. The dark and mysterious figure of the Duke is interesting and knowing that he is a villain in himself causes more curiosity. Keep it up!
            
            I would love for you to read my story too! Read everything! I'm sure you will be overwhelmed with emotions and twists and turns! See you later and good work.
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