SaviourVoid
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Hey your story did give an idea on what to write with my favorite survivors from Danganronpa V3. You know of Arifureta right? Well I'm making a story about how the survivors are given chance in another universe to have a normal life. There they go to Hajime Nagumo school and become friends with him. Things go good until they are summoned to another world. There things go bad after the four fall into the abyss after a betrayal. Then the 3 survivors change their ways similar to Hajime and they travel together with Hajime to go home and get back the normal life they deserve. What do you think? Here is the link to my story: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14390924/1/A-New-Game-In-Another-World
Jes_132
@SupernovaStrDestryr I'm glad I could give you an idea for your fic. I checked out this fic of yours, even though my knowledge of Arifureta is lacking, as it's been a while since I've read it. I'll say it's a solid start. If you want my honest opinion on the first chapter, I think I left a review on your fic, but I can't be sure if it showed up, if it hasn't, I'll rewrite it on here if necessary. However, if you want advice for the fic, feel free to reach out to me here. (unrelated, but I love the touch of the Jupiter necklace for Maki) (lol, the Himiko growth spurt... I wonder if there was an actual reason for giving her that suddenly in your fic, or am I just overthinking it? )
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SaviourVoid
btw. The late fast growth spurt Himiko Yumeno had from your story made me have the idea to give her the same in my story
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