SaviourVoid
Hello?
AntonioBradford1
Are you still updating this story
SaviourVoid
Hey your story did give an idea on what to write with my favorite survivors from Danganronpa V3. You know of Arifureta right? Well I'm making a story about how the survivors are given chance in another universe to have a normal life. There they go to Hajime Nagumo school and become friends with him. Things go good until they are summoned to another world. There things go bad after the four fall into the abyss after a betrayal. Then the 3 survivors change their ways similar to Hajime and they travel together with Hajime to go home and get back the normal life they deserve. What do you think?
Here is the link to my story: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14390924/1/A-New-Game-In-Another-World
Jes_132
@SupernovaStrDestryr I'm glad I could give you an idea for your fic. I checked out this fic of yours, even though my knowledge of Arifureta is lacking, as it's been a while since I've read it. I'll say it's a solid start. If you want my honest opinion on the first chapter, I think I left a review on your fic, but I can't be sure if it showed up, if it hasn't, I'll rewrite it on here if necessary. However, if you want advice for the fic, feel free to reach out to me here. (unrelated, but I love the touch of the Jupiter necklace for Maki) (lol, the Himiko growth spurt... I wonder if there was an actual reason for giving her that suddenly in your fic, or am I just overthinking it? )
SaviourVoid
btw. The late fast growth spurt Himiko Yumeno had from your story made me have the idea to give her the same in my story
SaviourVoid
I love how you make Kokichi/Airi speak in the way that he spoke in the Japanese voice acting. Adding a -Chan suffix in the end for their names.
Jes_132
@Chaos-Breaker667 Thx! I wanted to keep the charm of Kokichi despite the odd circumstances he finds himself in. So I'm glad you like it as well.
SaviourVoid
You want to know what I think would also be good?
Jes_132
@Chaos-Breaker667 Now, isn't that something? Who knows, maybe I already thought of that, Or maybe I'm lying right now, and am impressed by your idea. In all seriousness, thanks for the suggestion, and who knows, maybe it's already planned out.
SaviourVoid
After they survive Shuichi, Maki and Himiko find themselves transported in a bus wearing matching uniforms going to AHNS.
AntonioBradford1
Will airi date kiyotaka
Jes_132
@AntonioBradford1 Hmm, I do have a draft of Ayanokoji in Danganronpa V3 (If you couldn't tell which one is my favorite in the Danganronpa series), but I think I want to focus on this fic for now as I find murder mysteries are difficult to write. However, who knows what the future holds?
