JessTitone

A utopian mountain village far away from civilization, a  boy with no memory, a mysterious accident, and secrets that have long been buried - The first chapter of the new and improved version of Chosen is up!  https://www.wattpad.com/638388161-chosen-chapter-one  I'd love to hear what you think!

Ryujinami

Hey there! If you don't recognize me, I'm a writer who has benefited from your constructive criticism. I just want to say thank you for commenting on an old book of mine years ago. Having a lot of silent readers is hard, but sometimes I remember the few people who comment and am inspired to go on. Thank you so much! :)

nattieaustin

@Ryujinami awww :)
            I feel like this was sent to me wow
Reply

laur9749

Hey! I was wondering if you would be able to check out my book The Rockhounds. It’s im the fantasy drama and a work in progress but I am looking for some feedback and constructive criticism in order to improve my writing. Let me know what you think!

JessTitone

@laur9749  Sure.  Would you mind checking out one of my stories as well?  I see that you've added "Chosen" to your reading list.  That's a good place to start.  :)
Reply

MatthewXavierBlack

Thanks for checking out "They Would be Gods." I hope you enjoy Ara and his family's adventure. I figured you might since you stories with heartbreak and heroes with flaws. Plenty of that in my story. I'm enjoying "Chosen" and love giving feedback. Some writers want more; others wish I'd say much less. Feel free to nudge me either way :)

MatthewXavierBlack

Thanks for the follow!
Reply