salenagom

Hi 
          I recently started writing a story and I would really love some honest feedback. Please read it and tell me if it’s good or if there’s anything I should improve — writing style, emotions, pacing, characters, anything at all. Constructive criticism is welcome because I genuinely want to make the story better. Thank you for taking the time to read it ✨

ryt_yard

Heyyy @jesea/solberg
           Mind a R4R V4V and a f4f.
          If you are too busy for all of it its fine you can choose one
          If you do consider please dont shy away from any sort of criticism that u have for my book 
          Thank you lots of love
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/330091452?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=ryt_yard

Jessa_Solberg

Hey
            I’d really appreciate an R4R/V4V with you. 
            I’d also love some honest, critical feedback. I’ll check out your story right away. Thanks so much, and all the best
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