JessicaJoyK

@Bee_Bamboozled it was on suggestions

Silver_Nitrate

@JessicaKeith8 I see. I'm glad that I'm recognized, I never correlated about those side bars with me.
          
          Hey, I'm surprised to say that I like your works. Usually, beginners don't do things right, so they mess up in their first stories. I'm proud to say that you did an excellent job avoiding those pitfalls. 
          
          There are the occasional slip ups called "spelling and grammatical errors" that everyone does in stories, but that's what the Spell Check is for. Do you think you could make your story titles more...original? I think it's a bit commonplace to have titles similar to ones you have now. 
          
          With those buggers out, I say that you have a great start and I like your organization.
          
          I'm a fan of Spider-Man, as you'll see in My Works. I try to avoid the plot many Spidey fans are writing about (Girl meets Peter Parker, in the form of Andrew Garfield, she gets powers, and they fall in love).
          
          Thanks for your support and I hope you take my advice in consideration!