Hey, can I ask you a question? Is the subtext of each chapter, like in the second chapter when I am talking about acting without thinking things through, leaping without looking and telling the stories of the circus, the teacher throwing water and my baptism, are the connecting threads too subtle? Or is it too on the nose? Like is it obvious how I am relating things, or is it so subtle that it doesn't even register? I have no idea how it is coming across, but each chapter should have more than one level to it. Like in the chapter about Patrick and the subtext about things not being permanent when you think they are, like the dye on the seats or the church. Is the connective tissue too obvious or too hidden?
