JessieG213

I'd rather write a story in pen than in pencil, so every time I make a mistake or edit, I will be able to see all the mistakes I've fixed. I want to see how perfect I have made it, and how much work I put into the piece of writing. 
          	
          	Pencil makes it neat and tidy, pen makes you see your mistakes and succeed. I'd rather see my mistake, and erase it than constantly making the same one again.

JessieG213

I'd rather write a story in pen than in pencil, so every time I make a mistake or edit, I will be able to see all the mistakes I've fixed. I want to see how perfect I have made it, and how much work I put into the piece of writing. 
          
          Pencil makes it neat and tidy, pen makes you see your mistakes and succeed. I'd rather see my mistake, and erase it than constantly making the same one again.