My life is destined to write short stories. It's epic but I love it!
Good start always begins with harsh comments..
"This is shit." says he, and i replied, "Thank you!"
"The story is shallow! It doesn't make sense." she scowled, and i retorted, "Yes, it's kind of shallow."
"It was a fine story. You should just be careful with the punctuation marks," she advised, and I said, "Thank you!"
"It was good, keep it up!" she said, and I asked, "Really?"
"The story is amazing!" he proclaimed and I said, "Wow! Thank you!"
Well, that's life.
Harsh comments are the best defense for such huge mistakes today, and little mistakes tomorrow.
Writing is not about putting the deepest word from the dictionary, it's not about how you completely know the right grammar and it's not about showing the world how amazing you are.
It's about giving hope to the readers, same as well, knowing what they'll feel while reading your story. They have to enjoy reading your work, they need to gain something, such as good ideas, manners, values, and so on.
Think the readers!
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If you found errors on my works, kindly tell it to me. Don't say, "You have errors here and there."
kung may nahanap po kayong mali, pakisabi nalang po.
Paalala: Di ako bihasa mag-ingles.
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