jacqvelyns
why tf u reporting books up in here boi
JesusLovesHP
JesusLovesHP
Just finished writing some more. Sorry i havent been able to write. I haven't had ideas or time to do it. Expect more every Saturday or Sunday depending. Hope y'all have a good day
yup_itz_bella
Your book is OK but you need to make it way more interesting and have more feelings inside the characters and say when the character is talking so for example when it's the dogs POV write dogs POV
JesusLovesHP
@yup_itz_bella tell ur sis that in @JisusKraylaTeam101 I finished writing some more, and that chapters 1 and 2 are in the same page. (For Love In The Tree) and follow us plz