Thewattpadreader

I saw in your blurb that one of the characters in your book is like Christian Grey.  Do you mean sob/Dom like shoe on head and her partner IRL or like the character from the books that real sub Dom partners hate? 
          
          Check you tube where shoe on head is talking about shades of grey. 
          
          If you incorporate information from Shoe about how (healthy) S/D relationships work and from Gift of Fear by Gavin DeBecker (about bad guy psychology and warning signs) you might do even better next time. 

thanks for the follow:)