Jezabelle8711

Would anyone hate me if I took down my book Dancing With Pain for some major editing? Nothing major should change but I want you guys to let me know what you think.

Jezabelle8711

@Jezabelle8711 I'm thinking of starting the morning they leave before she wakes up and add in a couple small flash back what do you think?
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OMGITSDACAT

@Jezabelle8711 Happy Birthday! As for Myrrin's pov I think that you could go back to any previous chapters and write his pov during that chapter, so like his thoughts when he was stalking Saige in the first or second chapter or his feeling when he realized that Saige smelled like a rogue. And by moving the plot along I mean writing more chapters and building relationships and stuff. Thanks!
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Jezabelle8711

@OMGITSDACAT You absolutely are not being rude or annoying this is amazing. 
          	  1 I'm going to be editing grammar, spelling, some description mistakes and adding some details as well as taking some.
          	  2 Not much I don't plan on changing major details or changing the plot though I might add some chapters in the middle.
          	  3 I don't know if I get some support and some time on a computer then not long but today is my birthday so this next week will be busy so I won't take it down yet.
          	  4 yes like I said the more support the more I'm motivated to update.
          	  5 I don't have anywhere at this moment to put any but once I do I will but I also need a character to add (hint hint).
          	  6 I'm going to add a chapter of Myrrin but I don't know where to start his pov from.
          	  6 I think I am going to add a pov every 5 chapters what do you think?
          	  7 I don't know what you mean by this? But I have most of the main plot points set up.
          	  8 I will be adding more details I kinda started this book in a note book in school hours so it was hard for me to add much without losing focus in school.
          	  9 Hmmm I don't know maybe show it go poof or pew.
          	  10 Not yet no there are some bigger points to hit coming up first.
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Jezabelle8711

Would anyone hate me if I took down my book Dancing With Pain for some major editing? Nothing major should change but I want you guys to let me know what you think.

Jezabelle8711

@Jezabelle8711 I'm thinking of starting the morning they leave before she wakes up and add in a couple small flash back what do you think?
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OMGITSDACAT

@Jezabelle8711 Happy Birthday! As for Myrrin's pov I think that you could go back to any previous chapters and write his pov during that chapter, so like his thoughts when he was stalking Saige in the first or second chapter or his feeling when he realized that Saige smelled like a rogue. And by moving the plot along I mean writing more chapters and building relationships and stuff. Thanks!
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Jezabelle8711

@OMGITSDACAT You absolutely are not being rude or annoying this is amazing. 
            1 I'm going to be editing grammar, spelling, some description mistakes and adding some details as well as taking some.
            2 Not much I don't plan on changing major details or changing the plot though I might add some chapters in the middle.
            3 I don't know if I get some support and some time on a computer then not long but today is my birthday so this next week will be busy so I won't take it down yet.
            4 yes like I said the more support the more I'm motivated to update.
            5 I don't have anywhere at this moment to put any but once I do I will but I also need a character to add (hint hint).
            6 I'm going to add a chapter of Myrrin but I don't know where to start his pov from.
            6 I think I am going to add a pov every 5 chapters what do you think?
            7 I don't know what you mean by this? But I have most of the main plot points set up.
            8 I will be adding more details I kinda started this book in a note book in school hours so it was hard for me to add much without losing focus in school.
            9 Hmmm I don't know maybe show it go poof or pew.
            10 Not yet no there are some bigger points to hit coming up first.
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Jezabelle8711

So, guys, I have a new book that I am starting to write I would like if everyone, whether they want to read the book or not, could go in and vote for the best cover. The book is going up as Secret Of The Gift. Thank you guys I luvs youuuu! <3

Jezabelle8711

Hey guys so once again I wanted to let every one know that if anyone had suggestions or ideas for my book I would love to hear all of them. I do take reading requests and I do dedications when I can get to my computer.
          
          If peoples would like to be a character in my book let me know I could make it possible (cause the more the merrier, right). The list for character information is below if you are interested.
          
           Also I love all comments bad or good and that if anyone wanted to talk let me know because I will totally reply. 
          
          I LUVS YOU GUYS!

Jezabelle8711

I have writer's block and was wondering if anyone wanted to have a dedicated character in it. If you're interested please message me and give me the answers to these.
          Character Info
          Name (First and Last):
          Nickname:
          Age:
          Height:
          Eye Color:
          Hair Color:
          Skin color:
          How does he/she dress?: 
          How does he/she treat others?:
          Optional
          Relationship skills:
          Siblings (if any):
          Habits: (smoking, drinking, rambling etc.)
          Hobbies:
          Talents/Skills:
          Favorite Sayings:
          Style (Elegant, shabby etc.):
          Is the character judgmental of others?
          Is the character generous or stingy?
          Is the character generally polite or rude?

Jezabelle8711

Do you have a specific way you want her to be introduced 
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Jezabelle8711

@Jezabelle8711 thanks I'll find somewhere to put her
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OMGITSDACAT

@Jezabelle8711 
            Name: Nova Winterfield
            Nickname: Idk, some people call her by her last name though
            Age: 15 years (older than Myrrin)
            Height: 5 feet 9 inches 
            Eye Color: blue that fades to green, dark brown ring around iris
            Hair Color: Dark brown, goes to mid-back
            Skin color: Olive
            How does he/she dress?: It depends on her mood, but the general thing is always neutral athletic leggings (Black, Navy Blue, Olive, Burgundy, etc) with white shirts and cardigans. If she's feelings especially happy (literally never) She'll wear shorts and a cute shirt. If she's feeling sad or frustrated sor dangerous she'll wear all black and her hair'll be down. 
            How does he/she treat others?: Expects respect and is harsh and distrusting towards everyone until they prove their worth. She doesn't talk that much though but always has a  comeback for everything. Even if she is friends with someone, she'll be kind of rude and it's hard for her to open up. A good listener.
            Optional
            Relationship skills: Bad at establishing them, good at keeping them. Not good AT ALL at sexual or romantic relationships because she's lost someone with whom she had a relationship like that with and she's afraid of commitment.
            Siblings (if any): An older brother that no one really sees often because he travels. He's pretty great though. She also had a younger sister but that's a story for later.
            Habits: Slapping people when she ges annoyed, frustrated, angry, or they say a terrible pun or something
            Hobbies: Reading and eating
            Talents/Skills: Fighting, baking, talking things out of people (rarely does this)
            Favorite Sayings: Rip, rip you, rip me (rip as in rest in peace(s), meaning death, death to you, death to me. Can be used seperately and in any situation)
            Style (Elegant, shabby etc.): Athletic and cute
            Is the character judgmental of others? Very.
            Is the character generous or stingy? It depends on who the person is, but generally keeps to herself.
            Is the character generally polite or rude? Generally rude.
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bitchbaker

@Jezabelle8711 thanks for adding my book on ur list hope u like it ❤️❤️❤️

Jezabelle8711

@tattoedgirl1992  I do like it and thank you for the follow. Would you mind checking out my book Dancing with Pain?
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Jezabelle8711

I'm working on a new update for Dancing with pain it should be up it the next two to three days. Although, I am starting to worry if anyone is actually enjoying it so I am going to ask for certain amount of votes comments or views in order to update again. If it doesn't reach the amount I have asked for I may stop updating the book....