JillianJuneBug

Hello, dear readers! These past couple months, I went through each chapter of Rewriting History and made various updates which range from minor grammatical/spelling/formatting corrections to complete scene or dialogue changes. The plot remains exactly the same, but you may find some added detail that wasn't there before. See below for a detailed outline of what was updated per chapter: 
          	
          	Ch 1-20, 22-24, 29, 32-33: Grammatical/spelling/formatting corrections. Some strings of dialogue or descriptions may have been added or altered, but not significantly enough to warrant going into more detail.
          	
          	Ch 21: Added a lot of extra dialogue as well as made us/(y/n) stronger and a more capable fighter. 
          	
          	Ch 25: I hadn't realized it, but this chapter was previously written in a rather mean-spirited tone which wasn't the intent. I rewrote most of the chapter to be more in the spirit of Naruto by having us meet Kabuto earlier (so our actions make more sense), as well as having Minato and others back us up. Overall it's a much lighter tone that I'm very happy with.
          	
          	Ch 26-27: These also felt darker than intended, so I removed unneeded details and added more action. I also replaced a lot of our dialogue and made us a bit stronger so our actions feel more understandable and earned.
          	
          	Ch 28: Added a couple more touching scenes to make my heart explode <3 <3 <3
          	
          	Ch 30: (On Ao3) Added an extra 1k words of pure, unadulterated smut >:) 
          	
          	Ch 31: Dialogue changes and removed the use of(Name) due to readers confusing it with (y/n), taking them out of the story. I removed (Name) and replaced it with more generalized, less distracting terms. 
          	
          	If you end up rereading, please let me know what you think! Also feel free to let me know if you're interested in more updates or changes and what you would like to see! ^^

MATSSU

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rewriting history changed the chemistry in my brain years ago bro ima reread it soon cuz ong IT WAS CRAZY. i'm looking thru my reading lists and the nostalgia is insane, i remember SPECIFICALLY the chapter where everyone's captured and y/n has to confess that she doesn't rlly like rin and THAT SHIT MADE MY HEART POUND UGHHHH i might not be remembering right but ima reread it and prob just be anticipating that one moment the whole time IM ALREADY GIDDY JUST THINKING ABT THIS BOOK HELP ME I HEART YOU SM <3 

JillianJuneBug

@MATSSU thank you so much, you’re making me blush so hard ahh! Would you believe that the exact scene you’re describing was one of the first ideas I had before writing the story? It was the push I needed to get the story started actually! It’s definitely one of my favorites too  I’ve made a few changes to some of the chapters here in there in the last couple years but I hope my story is as fun as you remember ❤️
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0800-JASONTODDS-FART

I LOVE YOU.....R OBITO FIC RAHHHHHHHHHHHH IT WAS SO GOOD I LITERALLY STAYED UP ALL NIGHT AND FINISHED IT IN ONE SITTING, AND THEN WHEN I WENT TO SCHOOL AFTER THIS I DIDNT EVEN FEEL TIRED OR NOTHIN BCUZ ALL I COULD THINK ABT WAS THIS FIC. I THINK U CHANGED MY LIFE GURL  ISTG U GOT MAGIC FINGERS AND THE MOST AMAZING MIND EVER TO COME UP WITH THAT AHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHA. im a ghost reader but i overcame it just to tell u this bcuz OMG UR OBITO FIC IS AMAZING?????????????? U LITERALLY MADE ME FALL IN LOVE WITH HIM EVEN MORE AND I DIDNT KNOW THAT WAS POSSIBLE..  can u pls sign ur autograph on my forehead ‍♀️ UR LIKE MY GODDESS ILL PRAY TO U EVERY NIGHT THAT U NEVER FACE ANY HARDSHIPS IN THE WORLD AND THAT UR ALWAYS HAPPY AND and ya.. SORRY HAHAHAHAHAHAHA :=) no but there were times i literally had to put my phone down bcuz why is she me...... LIKE IT WAS EMBARASSING BCUZ IT WAS LIKE U PUT ME IN UR BOOK AND I JUST............ like omg i dont even ajdwajkdlsalkdlal I LOVE U IM SORRY,,,,,, CAN U AND OBITO HUG ME AND TELL ME THAT EVERYTHING SI GOING TO BE OK ..... and can he whisper sweet nothings into my ear.... OK SORRY HAHAHAHA NO BUT i ltierally read ur entire story in like 6 hrs... and wattpad told me it takes like 11 hrs its over 4 me,,  BUT OMGGGGGGGGGG THIS POST IS LONGER THAN MY ENGLISH ESSAY,,,,,,,,,,,, but u deserve everything life can possibly give u bcuz what,,, like how did u write that obito fic and u dont get a million dollars and huge mansion??? U DESERVE MORE THAN A MILLION DOLLARS OMG IM SORRY OK ILL STOP HAHAHAHAHAHAHA I LOVE U <3333333333333333333333,,, and i think ur obito fic can literally cure anything.. its like a panacea OK THIS IS TOO LONG BYE I LOVE U MWAHHHH 

JillianJuneBug

@0800-JASONTODDS-FART OH MY GOSH! What a wonderful comment to wake up to hahahaha! Thank you for this absolute river of beautiful (and funny) words!! Obito just brings me SO much joy even to this day and I’m so happy I can share that with you! May you find joy and happiness in everything you read - ILYSM MY DEAR READER <3
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Nekumo1

Wow, I remember reading "Rewriting History" a while ago and it still gives me the same exciting and happy feeling I get with every chapter. (Y/N is totally me too!) I just wanted to say that this is the best Obito fanfic I have ever read and you have inspired me so much with every chapter. I am so grateful and hope that one day I can be just like you. Thank you for every single second of time you put into making this.

JillianJuneBug

@Nekumo1 aww this is so sweet! ❤️ Thank you for your wonderful words and I’m so ecstatic I could share my story with you  Obito will forever be an inspiration to me and I hope to bring more stories to lovely readers like you  to this day I’m constantly going back to Rewriting History to add things here and there that enhances the story, if you ever have thoughts of little scenes or pieces of dialogue you’d like to see, I’d love to add something for you. Thank you again, dear reader~
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JillianJuneBug

Hello, dear readers! These past couple months, I went through each chapter of Rewriting History and made various updates which range from minor grammatical/spelling/formatting corrections to complete scene or dialogue changes. The plot remains exactly the same, but you may find some added detail that wasn't there before. See below for a detailed outline of what was updated per chapter: 
          
          Ch 1-20, 22-24, 29, 32-33: Grammatical/spelling/formatting corrections. Some strings of dialogue or descriptions may have been added or altered, but not significantly enough to warrant going into more detail.
          
          Ch 21: Added a lot of extra dialogue as well as made us/(y/n) stronger and a more capable fighter. 
          
          Ch 25: I hadn't realized it, but this chapter was previously written in a rather mean-spirited tone which wasn't the intent. I rewrote most of the chapter to be more in the spirit of Naruto by having us meet Kabuto earlier (so our actions make more sense), as well as having Minato and others back us up. Overall it's a much lighter tone that I'm very happy with.
          
          Ch 26-27: These also felt darker than intended, so I removed unneeded details and added more action. I also replaced a lot of our dialogue and made us a bit stronger so our actions feel more understandable and earned.
          
          Ch 28: Added a couple more touching scenes to make my heart explode <3 <3 <3
          
          Ch 30: (On Ao3) Added an extra 1k words of pure, unadulterated smut >:) 
          
          Ch 31: Dialogue changes and removed the use of(Name) due to readers confusing it with (y/n), taking them out of the story. I removed (Name) and replaced it with more generalized, less distracting terms. 
          
          If you end up rereading, please let me know what you think! Also feel free to let me know if you're interested in more updates or changes and what you would like to see! ^^

euchxha

HI! BASICALLY I JUST WANT TO SAY HOW AMAZING OF A WRITER YOU ARE. i just finished “REWRITING HISTORY,”- it’s my first obito fanfic I’ve read and honestly, I think it set very high standards for anything else I’m going to read 
          
          it’s such a rarity for me to cry over books when reading them, I’m not an emotional person, but not only did this made me cry, I cried uncountable times throughout the chapters. (maybe the fact i kept playing sad naruto themes while reading LDNSN but still) i don’t know how you do it, and i know a lot of people already said this, but the way Y/N is written is so relatable, and understanding how she feels is so easy, it just makes it seem so realistic, and her relationships with everyone too.
          
          and Y/N’s flaws- her jealousy over rin, her doubts of why she was sent to the shinobi world also makes things so much more realistic, because that’s exactly what i would think as well or behave. it’s all written so beautifully omg, i could name more things i love about this, but there’s too much HAHA, as deidera would say, this story IS TRUE ART AAAAAH 
          
          sorry this is so much, but i just never had a book make me feel like this before, thank you so much, and your book deserves to be read by so many people!! i hope you’re doing great and be safe! <3 

euchxha

AWW THIS MAKES ME SO HAPPY, AND YES, YOU AND Y/N ARE SO VALID, PLEASE KNOW THAT. ILL DEFINITELY STICK AROUND WITH MORE COMMENTS SOON FDSJDLFJSDF, STAY WONDERFUL AS WELL! :DD
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JillianJuneBug

@theuchihaway Hi there! Firstly I need to say that your post made me clutch my pillow so tight AHHH! Thank you SO much for your kind words! Frankly I needed the reminder that Y/N is a believable and relatable character (which really shouldn't be that hard since Y/N is literally me put into words), but I get so many people insulting or cursing at her (or me) so to hear that there are others who think Y/N is valid give me so much LIFE! So thank you - thank you SO much for that! 
            
            I'm always so enthralled to hear that my story and writing has left such an impact, especially since I used to feel that strongly for some fanfics I used to read. Also don't ever feel like you can't gush all day about the things you love about the story, I LIVE for comments like these<3 Please stay safe and stay wonderful dear reader<3
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Appletown89

I hope you are well 
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JillianJuneBug

@Valeria_Roa hi there! Thank you for your comments and best wishes! I’m doing well, trying to balance a full time job and grad school but I still find the time to write for our sweet bird boy <3 no worries - I have the whole story planned out, I’m trying to post every month or two and I’m still going strong! Thank you for your kind words, it truly is encouraging <3
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nahidlegitwin

I HAVE NO WORDS RO EXPRESS HOW MUCH I LOVED YOUR STORY! I HONESTLY WASN'T THAT INTERESTED IN OBITO, BUT WHEN I READ THAT, I SAW THE UCHIHA IN SO MANY DIFFERENT WAYS.......I NOW LOVE HIM!!
          
          OH GOD THE STORY JUST MAKES SO MUCH SENSE, THAT I EVEN REGET IT NOT HAPPENING IN THE ANIME! THE READER IS SUCH A RELATEBLE CHARACTER, MAKING IT TRULY REALISTIC! THE CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT WAS TEAR BRINGING! OUR RELATIONSHIP WITH KAKASHI JUST.....IT KEPT ME ON MY TOES! 
          
          I JUST LOVE YOUR STORY SOOO MUCHHH!!!! AHHHH!!!

JillianJuneBug

@Uchiha_Shiro-chan AHHH THIS COMMENT BRINGS ME SO MUCH LIFE!!!! Seriously, you really brightened up my day, I'm so glad I was able to log in and see this beauty you wrote for me! Sometimes I can't log in for some time and when I do I see someone had posted weeks ago and I feel like it's too late to reply to them or I'll be weird >___< but anyway, please know that after a rollercoaster of a day, this had me jumping for joy! I'm sending hearts your way, dear reader<3 To you and everyone else here, thank you<3
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