JimPeacock

"Don’t be a dick. If you’re a dick I have to be a dick and I’m a way bigger dick than you." - Tobe Sparkles
          	
          	'Ninja at Law', the Tobe Sparkles yarn, is through the Early Reader feedback stage and will begin second edits shortly. w00t!

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CALL FOR ACTION - Early Reader Feedback (ERF) needed for Weavers draft.
          
          I will be ready to distribute the 1st draft of Weavers (Ages of the Seed, Vol 1) for early reader feedback by Friday 11/27.
          
          The purpose of early reader feedback is to give basic impressions on story, plotlines, characters and environments before I begin the extensive second draft of the work.
          
          The ideal early readers for Weavers are:
          * Fantasy fiction / adventure fans. Weavers is suitable to a YA audience.
          * NOT already participating in the Ninja at Law ERF. I'm looking for fresh looks into the world and NAL early readers already know a bunch of stuff.
          * Able to read a 16k novelette beginning 11/27 and provide topical feedback by 12/11.
          * Be accepting of praise and thanks and my mention of same in the foreword when the book goes to print.
          
          If you would like to participate please give me a holler. Just send me a PM and let me know where to send the draft pdf.
          
          Thanks, y'all!

JimPeacock

Angel flopped into Roddy's infamously comfy chair and crossed her arms. "Honestly, sometimes I can't tell whether Tobe is passionate or just crazy."
          
          Roddy laughed. "Well if he isn't crazy then he's passionate as a shithouse rat."
          __________________________ #NaNoWriMo work continues for Ninja at Law. I hit 50% last night and it felt awesome, except for the part about staying up until 2am to do it.
          
          Early reader copies for NAL will distribute by 11/20/15. If you're interested in participating please let me know.

JimPeacock

NAL 1st draft complete and distributed for early reader feedback.
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"I hate running the way a fish hates Pelicans. Specifically, I think running wants to kill me and shit my bones on a beach somewhere."
          
          - Tobe Sparkles

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Wattpad thinks this message may be offensive. I wonder if it has a problem with 'shit' or 'kill'? Or maybe Wattpad hates running as much as Tobe.
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Betrayal, the next part of 'Makers' is posted. This is the last of the rewritten chapters. Further progress on this book will be minimal during November as I concentrate on a different Seed age for NaNoWriMo. 

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*prewritten chapters, that is. 
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I have decided to use NaNoWriMo to work on interludes and expositions. These will essentially be 2-3k short stories not connected to any of the other books. These won't here appear on Wattpad. They've for compiled versions. 
          
          If you'd like to see these short stories as I develop them over November drop me a message with your email info.
          
          Thanks, and happy #NaNoWriMo!