PinSky01
Hi ,
Sorry to bother you but I came across your profile by seeing your comments on a story..
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It would be very helpful if you can just check my profile and give me a review of the story I just started to write . Hope I'm not asking for too much ...
https://www.wattpad.com/story/411794709?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=PinSky01
Jiminslefttoe
@PinSky01 okay so I just read it like ik it's a bit fast but I'm a fast reader hehe, I recommend like using these "" whenever a character is talking and then like when they r doing sth you just like leave it like how I'm talking rn like this ' "Hey girl how are you?" I said in the phone ' Like that! But over all if it's good, for a newbie or a new writer !