“White walls, tiled floor, the antagonizing
voice of him were running through his
mind as he fled from the building that
once held him captive. Everything was
spinning as the shouts got louder, he
started to lose his footing causing him to
trip but he didn't let that stop him. City
streets finally came into his view, cars
zoomed by right in front of the boy but
he still wasn't in the clear, they were still
after him. He couldn't get the attention
of anyone in the cars but he saw a man
walking toward his car, maybe he could
help.”
how do you guys feel about this? it’s just a small snippet of what i’m planning. should i build on this?