Jinx-01

Thank you for your patience! Life got in the way but I am slowly getting back to reading and writing. Thank you for your patience. 
          	
          	Also if someone wants a genuine r4r ping me as I might have a spot left. 
          	
          	Cheers!

Jinx-01

@CoffeeAndSilverInk  omg, omg. But of course ❤️
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CoffeeAndSilverInk

@ Jinx-01  You know what, I need motivation and I had your book in my tbr anyway. I'm down if you are
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NobleScribe

Hello, I am interested in genuine RfRs with comments and voting. I leave professional advice or praise for all chapters. Please do my novel, Chronicles of Avaloria, posted below.
          
          I will also respond to all comments! Please let me know if interested, or simply begin the RfR, and I will respond in kind. Thank you!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/391518856?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=NobleScribe

NobleScribe

@Jinx-01 no prob
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NobleScribe

Do you have a specific book you'd like me to read?
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Jinx-01

@NobleScribe I can star only later. Read one chapter and wait. Thanks.
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MOHU07

Hi, please give my story a chance and read the first few chapters.
          
          Unified W is a fantasy adventure filled with action, mysteries, character growth, and a world that slowly reveals its secrets over time.
          
          As Kai's journey unfolds, he finds himself caught between forces far greater than himself. Every answer uncovers new questions, and every victory comes with a price.
          
          The deeper he travels into the world, the more he begins to realize that not everything is as black and white as it first appears.
          
          If you enjoy stories with long-term mysteries, hidden connections, and characters who are forced to grow through both triumph and hardship, I hope you'll give Unified W a chance.
          
          I hope you'll enjoy reading it as much as I've enjoyed writing it.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/280601765?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=MOHU07

Jinx-01

Thank you for your patience! Life got in the way but I am slowly getting back to reading and writing. Thank you for your patience. 
          
          Also if someone wants a genuine r4r ping me as I might have a spot left. 
          
          Cheers!

Jinx-01

@CoffeeAndSilverInk  omg, omg. But of course ❤️
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CoffeeAndSilverInk

@ Jinx-01  You know what, I need motivation and I had your book in my tbr anyway. I'm down if you are
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Jinx-01

I am not good at writing blurbs but they are important. 
          
          So here we go. Book 2, the sequel to The Empty ones has a title (At least for now. Might change.)
          
          Feel free to have opinions on what I should change or is lacking. 
          
          The Powerful Few
          
          "Escaping felt like being born again but having to die first. 
          
          Zaretha is still dreaming of flames several nights after she fled the fire in the brothel and left the capital behind. 
          
          Surviving was a miracle all together, but in this case the miracle has a name and brought with it, own problems. 
          
          Where to now? Far away but where? To Tajir where she would like to be or anywhere else to not bring war to the door of the people she cares about?"

Jinx-01

@XannaLurel yeah, that's good feedback. Thanks!
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XannaLurel

@Jinx-01 I think not bad, but maybe to start with something like "Before being born again, she had to die first..." Maybe remove "several nights after", "altogether", "in this case", so it to be more dynamic. Where to go now?
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jambudweep

@Jinx-01 Neither am I very good at this. But from what I've understood so far, the core purposes of a blurb are to create curiosity, set the tone, and introduce the central conflict. And honestly, the one you've written is doing its job well.
            
            The opening line, from my perspective, reflects the circumstances Zara has gone through in the first book and subtly leads into her journey at the beginning of the second. The following two paragraphs help establish the tone of the story, and the final one builds curiosity effectively.
            
            So overall, I think it's working. That said, as you continue writing, things will become clearer, and you can always tweak it accordingly. :))
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Jinx-01

Where are the good stock photos. I want a cover fast, I don't have time to draw but I also don't want to use AI. :(

Jinx-01

@BeeGee565 yeah, me too. That's a principle
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BeeGee565

@Jinx-01 
            Personally,  I'd  prefer any "ugly drawing" over AI.
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BeeGee565

@Jinx-01 Shutterstock and Getty Images have royalty free stock photos and have been around for many years.
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luna_writts07

Hlo dear, are you interested in R4r?? I will read one chapter a day and also be your genuine reader!!

Jinx-01

@luna_writts07 you can choose whichever you think you will enjoy most
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Jinx-01

@luna_writts07 hello! Thank you for you interest. We can try but I don't have a lot of time on my hands right now so I won't be able to read a chapter per day. I propose we read a chapter and wait for the other to conclude the chapter too. If it takes a few days it's fine too.
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