I plan on getting rid of the mana count system in the next chapter and instead have different ways of expressing a characters mana supply. Especially if there tired/ low on mana because of certain spells.
If you get some notifications of me changing chapters ignore it. I was just seeing what adverbs I could or could not be over using. Which isn’t much thankfully.
My goal is to use less adverbs and be more clever with how I describe things. I didn’t realize using adverbs could be perceived as lazy writing. That’s kinda why chapter 12 is taking a bit longer then I planned.
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