Omg sorry for late reply my weekend just started lol, and thanks for reading my story!!! : D (apologies for my early spelling mistakes lmao ) I thought the episode was a good first for SBR! The only things I'm “iffy” on is Gyro’s blue eyes and his English VA sounding too much like Gojo to me lol, if I wanted to crack Gojo I'd watch JJK lmaooo! No way, I'm a Gyro girly heheh
But regrading writing advice… I’d say the best thing you can do is read other stories and pick and choose what you like! Your writing style should reflect your personal taste, depending on whether you like first-person POVs, third-person POVs, less descriptive, or more descriptive— And figure out when you’re most creative! For me, I find that I’m really creative at night, so that’s why I upload chapters around 2 or 3 AM because that’s the time I feel most creative during writing. (Even though it's bad for me lol) And make a special place for writing! I like writing stories in bed with my laptop with music reeeaaal low, or without words, that way my brain isn't too distracted but I have something in the background playing so I don't go completely crazy. And get Grammarly— Though tbh, it's waaay better to read through and edit on your own instead of trusting it, Grammarly isn’t the writing god. For me personally, it gives me writing suggestions that I don’t agree with. I really just need it to just fix my misspelled words and not try to rewrite a whole sentence for me in lame terms. And I've had it mess up words for me that I'm trying to get it to fix, but I'm unsure it there is another extension better than Grammarly out there but that's what I've been using… Don’t trust it.
Anyways, that's my advice! Good luck writing! :))))