@booklover507777 hey I read it and I think it's great so far, I like how the reader doesn't know the full backstory yet which makes them want to keep reading, and I love the character dynamics, but one thing I will say is to try and make is clearer when the dialogue starts and stops and who's saying it but it's all good! For how you want to go in the future, you said you wanted them to escape so maybe cause some kind of distraction like a fire or a widow breaking free from the red rooms control which gives them an opportunity to escape, I like how you're slowly introducing the characters not all at once so it's easier to tell who the story is focused on, later you said it was a Peter parker x reader so maybe introduce the main character to the other Avengers and to Peter, you can give them something to set of the spark in them both like a small conversation more than the other Avengers like something that sets Peter apart from the others. Again I love it so far and there is so much you can do with what you have so far, I'm leaving these tips open and general so you have control and options over where you want it to go. You don't need to take my advice but you can, you can give credits if necessary if you want but I'm not bothered if you don't, one thing I would say though is don't be afraid to let the main character get hurt badly or have something bad or dramatic or traumatic happen but also have a balance of good to bad, message me if you would like anything else because I'd love to help you of you need it xx ❤️
