ZuitheRedfox

Olá, amigo(a)! Thank you so so much for voting on my history! I'm really happy that you took some time to check out a random and novice writer like me. If you plan on reading it any longer, remember that feedback is always welcome, so feel free to speak your mind if you're unsatisfied with anything! Much love from Brazil, and have a nice week! 

Jmpnascimento

Your welcome. I’ve already read until the formation of the teams and up until now I’ve found your story to be very great. And yes, I do plan on keep reading it and I’m not unsatisfied with anything. Much love from Brazil e espero que você também tenha uma boa semana
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NeoLegion

Glad you like new Chapter. Would love some thoughts or criticism you have 

Jmpnascimento

Just continue what you are doing. I haven’t read lots of Overlord fanfics, so I don’t know what would be the best to do, but I do know that your story has both the quality(good grammar and plot) and quantity(long chapters),. There is also the fact that you’re making the MC have his own story and he isn’t just some guy that is following Ainz in HIS adventure, therefore making your story unique. I don’t know exactly what readers of Overlord fanfics like, but the way I see it, your originality is a good thing that makes your story different than the others(in a good way).
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NeoLegion

thanks for the vote

Jmpnascimento

Nah. Your being to harsh with yourself. It might not be an incredible or amazing story, but it certainly is a good one and definitely not trash. Believe me, i have read horrible stories before and your’s not one of them.
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NeoLegion

@Jmpnascimento 
            Thanks, dont know why you vote cause my story is trash 
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