JoanMcKnight475

Hi there, fellow creator! I was wondering if you can read my book.
          
          Melody
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/384999468?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=luvshb
          
          I just need a genuine review from you for me to improve myself and my writing in the future. In any way, I'll support you back. Feel free to delete my comment.
          
          Thanks.
          
          luvshb

Hey, sorry to bother you but you commented on my story..TILL THE END...You asked if you could give feedback and that's very okay with me. If you're willing I'm here to listen to whatever you have to say. Thank you in advance and again, I'm sorry for being a bother.

I am  very  open to feedback if you are inclined

Please read the first 2 chapter and tell me how to continue further by giving your feedback please ☺️