Hey so I'm in the process of writing a crime drama of sorts here's an extract what do you guys thing ??
My name’s is Detective Walt… Walt Ringer. Now this story starts on the 23 of November 1951, oddly enough that’s the kid’s birthday; she’d just turned 8, she was called Olivia. Primary school kid; she weren't too popular other kids where afraid of her, sad really. Now you know the who, let’s go back to where I started. Olivia she was sitting in a play park on that day, just looking at other people. Her dad didn't have much money to spare. He was a caring man always did best by his daughter; liked to see her smile I guess, John was his name John McBane worked in an old saw mill made furniture for a living… He left his little girl alone in that park as he went to get her an ice lolly; crazy girl enjoyed the cold I assume.