JoeShmo268
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I want it to be knowned that this was made in like 30 minutes before bed so i am super tired and not wanting to go to work tommorow I also ask you forgive the most likey extra spelling mistakes and random sentences in the middle of another one if there are any I blame it on my tiredness but really wanted to get this done before I didn't have the motovation and so I could try to offer any help I possible be. I also had a lot of running and quick jumpscares in mind not giving Y/N a moments rest so that way I was thinking of Day Z and on the ship him running through barley doudghing stuff and being hunted I also thought it would be terrifying adding the Droid infected in the escape pod or infecetied without knowing and just the sense of dread after surving all of that, its close to halloween so I was thinking the MOst Horror I could while keeping it SOMEWHAT PG lmao but with that being said goodnight and I can't wait to see what you cook up
JoeShmo268
I want it to be knowned that this was made in like 30 minutes before bed so i am super tired and not wanting to go to work tommorow I also ask you forgive the most likey extra spelling mistakes and random sentences in the middle of another one if there are any I blame it on my tiredness but really wanted to get this done before I didn't have the motovation and so I could try to offer any help I possible be. I also had a lot of running and quick jumpscares in mind not giving Y/N a moments rest so that way I was thinking of Day Z and on the ship him running through barley doudghing stuff and being hunted I also thought it would be terrifying adding the Droid infected in the escape pod or infecetied without knowing and just the sense of dread after surving all of that, its close to halloween so I was thinking the MOst Horror I could while keeping it SOMEWHAT PG lmao but with that being said goodnight and I can't wait to see what you cook up
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saying that him and Yoda received another transmission form Y/N a few days later it is distorted and glitchy but the recording is basically a severely decayed Y/N pleading into the HoloREcording to come rescue him but his eyes are hollow and voice is robotic and he is unnaturally still I would assume you will be able to write a powerful Council session and continue off there cause that about all I had atm but tell me what do you think and I would love to see your idea about what might happen. I made this with horror and shock in mind so maybe Y/N survives this and is just traumatized and quickly return to the Council to report this with haste and despair then go form them but just me explaining this all is already at 10k lmao I barley write 2k for my story chapter idk what it is but it should help you get a better idea or just inspiration Goodluck my friend and I can't wait to see what you have in mind
JoeShmo268
this Voice keeps talking to you saying how you should go to another planet with more people and it even starts to debate you on Sith and Jedi ideology it tells you that it has seen it all and keeps encouraging you to stop resisting to join it and it terrifies you... out of desperation and acceptance you start a hologram message make to go to Obi wan and the Council in general. You start by explain where you are and then you explain what happens and how you know it won't be long before you are dead or become one of those things eather way you break down as the voices get lounder and you admit that you are terrified and you start to apolozige to them about how you have many regrates but it all doesn't matter anymore before you collect yourself and explain how they CAN"T under any circome stands come looking for you, they need to stay far away and not to contact him anymore as he will destory the ships communication but if the thing does somehow able to send another message to ignore it and destory the ship with him in it if nessasarry and I want it to be visable in the Hologram (that is being watched by the council Anakin and even Ashoka) that Y/N body is starting to decay before their eyes with his Limts and robotic limbs twiching and Y/N slowing loosing control of them before looking one last time at the screen and saying how he loves Ashoka and how sorry he is not to be able to keep his promise to returen before shakely taking his Lightsaber and looking at the holorecording one last time and slashing some stuff before aiming the saber at himself and the Hologram shutting off before what is implied is showen.. (If you aren't comfortable with writing that I understand just stop it after he is shown destroying his ships controls) I want the Councils Stunned and scared reaction while Anakin Obi Wan are shown visibly sad and I would assume Ashoka would be numb and not reacting at all but EVERYONE would feel her reaction and grief before Mace interrupts
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and even try to cut it up but realized trying to cut a liquid with your lightsaber is going about as well as trying to cut a moving river coming at you, it isn't very fast so you can avoid it easy enough for now but there is so much of it.. and its going in all direction so as you are trying to figure out a way to get rid of it you are constantly having to dodge puddles of it that fall out of vents or seep through the walls, You know you are running out of Options you have figured out Force Judgment seems to be More effective but you don't nearly have the power or energy to get everything off your ship, you order your Droid (Forgot it's name) to get to a escape pod and wait to eject it until you get there. when you do and are flying away from your ship you turn in shock and horror when your Droid starts short circuiting and you see that Liquid seeping out of your droid, You can't run anymore and while not being a crazy amount there is still a lot for the small space you are in and you can't concentrate like you usually do you are shaken up by the past hours (Or days depending out long you want in between these events I would say days maybe weeks) and while destroying some of it, you can't get it all... you suddenly wake up in the escape pod still drifting and you can see the effects of your battle with saber marks and shocks damage but you cant see the liquid but you can 'feel' something in your head like something is there that shouldn't be over the next few hours you get sicker and sicker and you pretty much figured out that the stuff is inside you and is consuming you the only reason why you even lasted this long is cause you have been trying to use the Force to slow it down but you know you can't stop it forever.
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(Insert DAY Z like urban fighting and you doing your absolute best to defend the citizen and the first thing you notice is you can't sense them just like that Kid.... you are able to use the Force on them but it is difficult and strange and the level of coordination they have it's almost like they all have the same mind, you witness death and Butallatly like you haven't ever seen, not even in the Clone wars until you are Forced onto you ship and flee the Planet and you take one last look behind you and you wish you didn't, You see nearly all major cities/Villages Burning you sense nothing but Fear and Death and then, nothing. You are in a Panic it destroys you for having to abandon that planet the the memories of what you saw haunt you it looked like the people were Biting each other or puking some Weird Liquid into each other mouths, or thrown into that DAM LIquid that seemed to consume everything and even grow bigger, You send a distress call to whoever is out there to listen about what you have seen and in a Panic you even send it the the Jedi in your state of confusion grief and Fear when you hear your door open, but you were supposed to be alone thought? When you look at the reason you see that same girl who showed you the warehouse, she is crying asking you what happened and how scared she is but something is wrong. Her Tears aren't tears, they are that Liquid stuff that you saw, and she isn' t really moving while she is 'crying' just almost like an imitation of crying for someone who has never cried in their life but the thing that gets your attention the most.. It's almost like she is decaying? like she has been dead for some time and is bloated because of the gasses created by the decaying flesh. You quickly realize she is one of the infected and as you strike her she suddenly explodes with the liquid going everyone but you have seen enough to avoid it
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while that is going on and since you can't sense the thing you don't notice the living liquid stuff attaches its self the the first dead/uncontiuous guy and unnoticed to you the further you get in the compound the more infected are created and once Y/N takes down the Boss and free the kids frees then contacts the local Athoraty after waiting and seeing the fed pull up he is surpired that there seems to be a comotion? Oh well maybe you missed a guy or 2 so you decide to help them but as you are backtracking you start to notice the lack of bodies even the ones you killed (Or if you didn't kill anyone the onse that you REALLY made sure stayed down) that and your parania with the kid before has you on edge big time and when you finally do get the the (However you decide to make it) you notice you can't hear anything anymore so and quietly and incspiquice and you can you go outside and look around and see bodies everyone Feds in uniform destoryed police droids (If they have any again up to you I just remember they have some on some planets) and some of the thugs that you just took down and as you yell you are shocked and confused why one turns to you with multiple blaster rounds in him and suddendly they ALL turn towards you and you see some the the Feds get up and with a Blank almost forced expression they all talk in Unisince "GET HIM" After some more fighting and eventually resorting to your lightsaber and cutting some down you begin to notice that well yes some stay down dead other who have fatel wounds barley notice and continue trying to attack you until you are overwelmed and are forced to retreat in town and get your wounds looked at. After you leave the Infected slowly begin to attack cities in a coordinated single minded way and are massacring the population like you have never seen before with unnatural strength and endurance and while the military and civilians put up a good fight they are ultimately turned and infected until they reach where you are staying
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The story begins where Y/N leave the jedi and is currently going planet to Planet in the Unknown Regions and I'd say I has accumulated a Decent bit of Knowledge but obviously hasn't figured out his Family connection yet and I think this would happen just before originally meeting Thrawn where he was stopping by on a habitable world to get more supplies when he hears about disappearing and people acting strange and he being the main character and full of REINVENT myself energy goes to and after only a day meets his first instance of Muggle Muggle when he sees a small child standing over a puddle and not moving or reacting and Y/N investigate for some reason could feel the Child there but nothing else about the Child almost like he was sensing a rock or a normal non object so when he goes to check on the kid the kid is talking to him but for some reason doesn't really seem right? he can't put his finger on it and something that actually begins to scare him is that he can't sense the meaning or intentions behind the Childs words like he would normally be able to and his sensing instead of telling him danger or safe just aren't reacting with her but the 'child' spins a Tale about getting kidnapped and there being more and asking Y/N for help saving the other children which almost reluctantly he aggress to and as they pass the puddle he almost thinks it moved towards him before brushing it off and going with the child. This Y/N Relief and despair the child was right and they come across a Warehouse that was a underground slave/black-market and so after telling the child to stay put while he rescues people the child blankly aggress much to Y/N Growing paranoia and as he turn to leave the child hugs him and ask him to be careful a almost robot like voice while starting up at Y/N with a blank expression and what he doesn't notice is the small almost liquid thin transfer onto Y/N metal arms. (Insert your writing for how Y/N sneaks in and kill or subdues the bad guys)
Khaoz894
working rn on the mnggal mnggal oneshot (it'd be a bit short because I find it a bit hard to write) but rest assure that it will be released.
Khaoz894
@ JoeShmo268 (tho if you could leave your idea here would be awesome cuz im still at the beginning and can change things)
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Khaoz894
@ JoeShmo268 lol, yeah. I did what you suugested once and put a video callled "Analyzing evil, Mnggal Mnggal." While doing stuff and that's how I decided to write the oneshot!
I'll try to not make it too short, nor too long. But enough to be enjoyable.
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JoeShmo268
@Khaoz894 freak, my internet is down, and I actually think I have a FIRE muggle muggle idea but haven't gotten around to sending it to you lmao. I'll see what I can do either before or during work tomorrow. Regardless, I'm still excited and didn't actually expect you to take my suggestion seriously lol
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Khaoz894
sorry to bother, but u okay man? Haven't heard of you in a while.
Khaoz894
@ Khaoz894 u got the whole star wars fanfic creators worried for u man lmao.
On a serious note, I really hope anything you're going trough gets better. I understand the feeling, I really do. And I'm glad I can have such an awesome reader like you in my community. Hope you get better, and i'll be releasing my chapter soon (hopefully this week)
Take care man, it's a crazy world out there.
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JoeShmo268
@Khaoz894 HI, I'm sorry I haven't been active lately Work has been really difficult lately and I have been having a hard time IRL with some things that I'm trying to work through. I have seen all of your Post and I a, Turley am Exited and proud of you (Also Write Block is totally Valid... I haven't posted on my story in Months Despite having Ideas for it I just can't find the Motivation to actually write. and IRL isn't really helping me atm) I do still have ideas for your story including a Muggle Muggle Non cannon chapter for you I just can't find the Motivation to write it and I don't want to half ass something since you don't deserve that You Deserve 200% since that is what you give me and all your other Views, I have also been looking at your comments and can tell people are also becoming for active and I truly hope that that there will be another person that can join us and become a trio lol I know I'm just another viewer but after one of my 3 or 5 post for a chapter I always hoped that someone would join us and give us a 3rd perspective to complete us like now if I was going throught things you would still have someone keeping you on your toes or just taking shots in the dark lol. I also find it funny because you aren't the only one I have been heavenly invested in and they are also asking If I'm ok as well so I have also been worried about him (He is also writing about star wars LMFAO)
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