JoeWode

Part 6 of chapter 2 for Wolf's Clothing is up. I'm so tired.
          	
          	This next part will be the climax for this chapter and should be a little longer than usual.

RustyNugent

Hi Joe,
          
          How are you doing? It's nice to meet you. If you have any time could you come by my place on wattpad and read both chapters from my book series. I see you like dark fantasy reads. That's what I write. Please leave a comment telling me your thoughts on my story. Thanks.

JoeWode

A new chapter for The World Serpent is up. This story...
          
          I don't know what to do with this story. This chapter was supposed to follow Lucian as he was inducted into the imperial army, but the chapter had so many issues i decided to re-write it completely. First, it was way too long (17 pages) and filled with extraneous plot points and clumsly characterization. Also, since the imperial army is basically run by insane people, the level of violence was just to much.
          
          I decided to rewrite the chapter to help emphasize the diference in Imperial and Brunish culture without resorting to making the empire too grotesque.
          
          So instead, here is Genero, a hapless Imperial guardsmen and his adventures in Vilmos, a new world settlement. i think having this chapter here will improve the pacing overall since the events in this particular character arc will deal more directly (or immediately, I should say) with the events of the prologue.

JoeWode

Chapter 2 part 5 for Wolf's Clothing is up, and hopefully this will be the longest i go without updating for a while. I went almost a week !
          
          I'll try not to let that happen again, but I'm not going to make any promises. It's really warming up in my part of the world, so I've been getting my garden ready and...well, its kind of a big garden.
          
          I've got 5 compost piles to turn, huegalkulture raised beds to make, branches to chip for mulch, oyster shells to smash, mushroom beds to innoculate, fruit trees to prune...Spring came early and it brought a lot of work with it.

MattParker0708

Hey Joe. Sorry it's taken a while to acknowledge the follow. Been away for a week. So, belated thanks for that and for the Reading List add. Hope you enjoy reading Engines & Demons.

JoeWode

@MattParker0708 No problem. I've really been enjoying it so far, which reminds me i need to go back and finish the rest.
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