Joewatt111

@Joewatt111 not to worry, when I start the request, I will definitely be keeping Josh Brolin alive since I never thought about killing him off, and I’ll be sure to have a different revenge method in mind after I’ve seen the movie. 
            
            And about the intimacy, I still haven’t decided if it will be shown  and yes the reader will definitely not be taking advantage of the situation, the reader will definitely be waiting until Marie is in a better mental state after what happens 

@SirSimpington hey.|just wanted to bring up something l've realized about the ending of the story.
            Of course you'll know better than I do after you see the movie, but I realized that there has to be a reason for the antagonist to "give up" in his revenge quest against Josh brolin since Marie will fall in love with the reader instead. I doubt he would just give up that easily given he spent maries entire life waiting to manipulate her and Josh brolin. Since she's going to hate him, which the antagonist would have no way of knowing, his plan fails but realistically he would probably try something else if he could. Josh brolin dying would solve this but I'd like to avoid that if possible
            Another thing I want to bring up is if the reader and Marie become intimate (whether or not you decide to show it) after she's nearly assaulted. If the movie doesn't give a good reason for how things go from point A to B in the first place (which I doubt it will do) I want the reader to at least
            acknowledge that Marie probably isn't thinking straight and doesn't want to take advantage of the situation.

Yes that certainly does help, and I will definitely ask you questions if I need to or do have concerns. 

@SirSimpington way to make me smile first thing in the morning! 10/10

@Joewatt111 but*

@SirSimpington bur of course no rush

@SirSimpington yep

@Haizlena it was sweet! Can’t wait for the others

@Joewatt111 awesome, this should be my final change, but if I have anything else, I’ll be sure to let you know 

@SirSimpington I don’t mind at all :) thanks for keeping me in the loop, cause I want you to write the best story you can and I don’t want to hinder your creativity

@Joewatt111 thanks, but I will also try to keep important scenes as close as I can to the movie with some of the changes I have in mind. 

@SirSimpington no worries :) I honestly have no problem with creativity liberties. Do what you have to :)

@Joewatt111 no worries, depending on how I do the Elizabeth one I will do the same 

@SirSimpington btw if you need to do that with the Elizabeth movie as well be my guest

@Joewatt111 thanks, It’s your request and I’d just wanted to make sure you were okay with it 

@Haizlena yay!!!!

@Joewatt111 glad! 

@Haizlena just read it! I loved it