Joey Richardson

Just going through piece by piece and adding some more to make the story better and talk more of the main character. Show who he is before during and after the war and his constant struggles.

Chapter seven part two and three are up. Now it is on to chapter eight. The introduction to the Salkmurine warriors and the legendary pirates. Aiming for five chapters of that and will then get back to Jarl. All about building up the different characters and then make you guys cry if I kill one of them. 

Chapter 7 part one is up. Been tweaking a few things. I believe the dialogue between the two best friends who are on opposite ends in terms of views is important to set up the feud in the future. The best of the main character is based off my best friend in real life. Thirty years plus of friendship and he as always been the genius and me the fighter. In the story though I get to outsmart him once and that is in the art of war. 

I have been doing some heavy rewriting and published to chapter six part one.

First part of Chapter twenty eight is up. Coming along nicely.
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Got chapter 26 up and a good start on both 27 and 28

Chapter 25 is up and am hard at work on chapter 26.

All the way up to Chapter 15 is back up. The main character who goes from being taken at birth, rescued by his father and clan, comes home and is emotionally scarred after over twelves years of being experimented on.  At fifteen he joins his warrior race’s military as a special case due to his history. All he desires is to fight and save lives and because of his abilities he can. At twenty five years of age he is an elite warrior of his people and is quite stoic in his demeanor. He never really shows emotion because of what happened to him. That doesn’t mean he won’t take certain actions that shows he will fight for what he believes. Along the way he will make new friends from races all over the galaxy that are of similar mind frame as him. He is still reserved but is more open as time goes on. Eventually in the end of the series he will smile.

Chapter ten is back up. Just going through each chapter piece by piece. 

Twenty chapters are up. I need to write five in the beginning. Sort of a prologue for events to come but am focusing on the story ahead and sharing it. You can do without the first five chapters to see what is going on.