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Hi bebs! Please support me on my first story on wattpad "The Lost Princess" https://my.w.tt/aXJgpH3Dc7. I will higly appreciate if u read also my other story!!!
          
          Thank you in advance, lovelots!♡♡

Hola perdón por la molestia quería avisarte que estoy escribiendo una nueva novela y te agradeceré si te podrías pasar por esta✨se llama viviendo juntos 

Thanks for the follow! 

@ajdavidson 
          Thanks, and Im still pretty young, I'm only 14. 

Hi,
          Read The Story of Roek. You have the basic bones of an interesting start, but it is a little over written. Try and cut out unnecessary words eg: the only light source that could be seen was a low light from the crack from below the door. All you need say is - the only light was from the crack below the door. Good writing is often more about the words left out rather than the words included. Make your reader's mind jump, it will help the story.
          Keep on writing, nothing helps like practice. My first book is still lying in a drawer, never having seen the light of day.
          Good luck,
          AJ