Underworld Tales

Hey! It's me Rama from my new account. I reviewed your book in the past. Just wanted to drop in and ask how your writing is going. That's all, Bye!
          
          P.S. I must say I really like your current theme.

Hello! This is Victoria/@CroodsGirl with the Featured opportunity! While I enjoyed reading your story, The Sage of Mafioso, I have chosen not to Feature it right now. You have a good main character and hook, but most of the story is telling over showing, so I couldn't take it as seriously as I wanted. There is also no description of the setting, so I can't find myself in this world you're creating. There are also minor grammar issues, but that's beside the point. I would have liked to see Angelo selling his house to save his mother--it's a heartbreaking thing--and see his emotional response to it, but I just couldn't take it seriously. The pace in the first chapter is a little fast, too, but again, that mostly has to do with telling over showing. Regardless, I appreciate your honest approach to the mafia; it just needs to be executed a little better. Once you revise and edit, I see this becoming a great story, and I wish you luck. Thank you again for letting me review your book, and good job on the main character!

https://www.wattpad.com/story/386251153?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=AnkitaMaiti9
          
          
          Can u read my new story and vote if u like it...
          Sorry for posting here without your permission 
          
          

Heyy.... Hope you are doing well  
          
          Firstly, sorry for posting without your permission.
          
          Please give my story a chance. It will mean a lot if you could extend your support by voting and leaving your precious comments  
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/342809464?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=curlygurl_tales

Try this book if u like CEO romance
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/374726734?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=JohanLiebert33

Thank you for following me.
          Enjoy the story of Hero and fasten your seatbelt.
          Let me know what you think of it  
          
          Wishes,
          
          Wolter

https://www.wattpad.com/story/384684431?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Eshi12x
          
          
          
          Okay then check this out 

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Hello, this is Catherine Victoria Christie (@CroodsGirl) with the Featured opportunity. Thank you for trusting me to review your book. Other than what I pointed out in the form, is there anything in particular you would like me to focus on?
          
          Thank you again!

Do you take reading requests and if so, what kinda books do you like?