John Bergdahl

What do you think of my Cosmic Fury story?

Love your fanfiction

Hey, John it’s me Williamsm8, the one that wrote the Kion and Vitani story. I just wanted you know that I’m gonna be using this current account 

I was the 50th follower .

quick question how many times have i said stop asking for update and yet what do you do "oi when is the next chapter coming" DUDE I JUST UPDATED NOT EVEN @ WEEKS AGO NOW SINCE YOU WONT STOP ASKING IM GOING TO BLOCK YOU ASS MAYBE NEXT TIME YOU WOULD LISTEN TO PEOPLE WHO SAYS DONT ASK FOR A UPDATE AND THIS WOULDNT HAPPEN @JohnBergdahl

New fact about the lion king 2 is out and why it will not be about simbas pride

Guys just posted a new book where i will keep you updated about the lion king (2) that is about Mufasas past go read it

LINE KING 2 YEEEEEEEEEES
          GUYS lion king 2 will happen and they will tell us the past of mufasa hope you are as happy for this as I AM

Hello.
          
          I'm here to give you friendly critique on your story..
          
          
          
          Probably only two tho..
          
          1: use less emoji.
              • The Emoji kinda ruined the story..
          Instead, you can write their expression
          Ex: Rani Smirked, Y/N chuckled, etc..
          
          2: better grammar
              • i understand if you're not native speaker (my main language is not English too) but at least try to use better grammar, so we can understand it better
          
          
          
          
          
          Oh, and thanks for supporting my story!

guys new episod is now out go read it and let me know what you think