JohnEffting

Hey there!
          	
          	I published a new book (and it is completed too). So if you want to check, here is the synopsis and the link :D
          	
          	"She woke up to continue what one day she was prevented to do. The world is sick and she is the remedy. 
          	The wind smiles together with the sun.
          	The trees' leaves scream her name (even if nobody knows it).
          	The savior is back without her moorings.
          	The nature toasts. The call was heard.
          	Finally, the world has a hope of survival.
          	She walks. And behind her, the snow follows her like a shadow. Like a friend. A partner."
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/660008889-1-she-walks

MaymayK12

I think you are an amazing writer, and have talent for this! I highly encourage you to keep working on your works, for I was enthralled in them. You are definitely a writer. I just can’t believe that you aren’t famous! You are creative, and descriptive. I could clearly picture, and invision the scenes as they were described. Keep up the good work! And if you ever need any suggestions, or for me to read your works I would gladly do so! Maybe you could even give me tips on creating illustrations, or help with ways to plan out events. I am quite new to writing. But anyways, since this comment is almost at 1000 words, I should probably end it here. Keep up the good work, and stay creative! For I, am a fan!

MaymayK12

@JohnEffting  You are very welcome!
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JohnEffting

@MaymayK12 OMG YOU MADE MY DAY! I was thinking about quit writing in English because I know i have a lot of grammar errors that probably I will take too long to learn. But this message made me think about not quiting anymore!
            
            Really, I am really happy here right now because of that! THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR writing this! <3 <3 <3
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MaymayK12

Also, I hope your having a good day! 
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JohnEffting

Hey there!
          
          I published a new book (and it is completed too). So if you want to check, here is the synopsis and the link :D
          
          "She woke up to continue what one day she was prevented to do. The world is sick and she is the remedy. 
          The wind smiles together with the sun.
          The trees' leaves scream her name (even if nobody knows it).
          The savior is back without her moorings.
          The nature toasts. The call was heard.
          Finally, the world has a hope of survival.
          She walks. And behind her, the snow follows her like a shadow. Like a friend. A partner."
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/660008889-1-she-walks

JohnEffting

I am already reviewing the book with a help of a grammar program. I can say that it is way better (and with more words and details about the story).
          
          I think I will post the changes tonight with a new chapter :D
          
          So if you didn't read yet, here is the link:
          
          "After three hours a children will be murdered in a field where only dust was before. No one will find his body for some days because a corn field will be there, big and alive. A corn field that wasn't there before. And even now, everyone who looks into that think it is impossible.
          The earth is so sick that most of the places can't get life to any kind of food.
          
          But he can.
          
          And he did it.
          
          The blood of the children fed the ground. And his arms were the ones who guided the poor child, curious about that plant that he never saw in life.
          
          As other children's blood will do in the future too.
          
          George started all that.
          
          I am sorry, my friend. If i knew ... I would never do that to you."
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/650162641-1-he-is-born

JohnEffting

Good morning. Did you take a look into my book already?
          
          Chapters every week (Yesterday I posted another one :D )
          
          "After three hours a children will be murdered in a field where only dust was before. No one will find his body for some days because a corn field will be there, big and alive. A corn field that wasn't there before. And even now, everyone who looks into that think it is impossible.
          The earth is so sick that most of the places can't get life to any kind of food.
          
          But he can.
          
          And he did it.
          
          The blood of the children fed the ground. And his arms were the ones who guided the poor child, curious about that plant that he never saw in life.
          
          As other children's blood will do in the future too.
          
          George started all that.
          
          I am sorry, my friend. If i knew ... I would never do that to you."
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/650162641-1-he-is-born