Well this is my update for the week,
Another Critique / Analysis completed for @Riprish - the first science fiction story! Look for the cool hook near the end of this WIP, brilliant, I was really impressed. Again, if you'd like this kind of treatment, DM me or post or whatever. I mostly use Shawn Coyne's "The Story Grid' method to analyze story structure. I don't care so much about grammar and the 'bits' I like looking at stories as a whole and help the underlying structures. Unfortunately, if I find things, it usually means big changes for the writer BUT, I hope its worthwhile work.
I'm still cranking out my Steampunk novella - though a lot slower than I anticipated. I'm just about @ 20k words, which I fell MAY be the first Novella, I'll have to see if I can end this story beat in a way that works.
More Cyborg will be posted today (I'll try and post enough to make a intelligent beat),
See you around, Space Cowboy,
John!