sleepy-lilly

The Veil of Darkness is an awesome story! Great job on bringing all of it to life. Your narrative was well paced and easy to follow and it caught my attention from the first chapters.Your descriptions were beautiful, very vivid and they truly felt like the game. Your characters were funny, well written and their journey has been very enjoyable! Your antagonist was something else entirely! Starting from an arrogant bully, his spiral down into corruption was executed flawlessly as you showed he had more depth than it was perceived at first.
          I really enjoyed the fact that you covered so many zones in your plot. It was refreshing seeing them through your eyes. A few of them are actually my favourites in-game, like Eversong, Ghostlands and Silithus.
          It was a real pleasure to read it and I certainly look forward to your next stories!

JohnPortland

@sleepy-lilly thank you so much for your kind words! I am beyond moved at how much you enjoyed the book! This has been a year of writes and re-writes, trying to make it all come together. Thank you so much for being the first person to read it in its entirety! I have the ideas for the next one bouncing around in my head already!
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isla_graceeee

Hey JohnPortland,
          
          I recently had the pleasure of reading your story and found it to be quite compelling. Your writing is impressive, and it sparked an idea, it would translate beautifully into a comic format.
          
          As a commissioned artist, I specialize in creating comics, manga, character art (including original characters) and cover art. I would be interested in the possibility of adapting your story into a comic, no pressure though.
          
          If this sounds intriguing to you, please feel free to reach out to me on Discord (username - islagrace_24) so we can discuss this further. I look forward to your response.
          
          Warm regards,
          Isla.

Alicemiareaders

Hello, Agent Oroko how are you doing?

Alicemiareaders

Got it Your book cover looks great! Do you have a favorite scene or moment in it?
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JohnPortland

@Alicemiareaders read the summary! Even more, start reading it! There's a whole Novel already written. I'm slowly adding segments, touching them up and posting. If you're a WoW fan or a fan of romantic high fantasy, then you gotta give it a shot! 
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Alicemiareaders

Okay, Just saw your book popup to me. Congrats; that’s huge. What’s the story about?
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