JojoDreams

Currently re-writing my first chapter of The Smiling Shadow. If there are any improvements anyone thinks I should make please let me know :)

ArlindiZemra

Hi! So, I would recommend you to edit the summary of your book because I honestly thinks it gives too much information away.
          Anyways, you can do whatever you want because it’s your book after all. Just wanted to leave some friendly advice:) 
          Btw, have a nice day!