Domo Deranne(Hi Deranne).Watashi wa JoahnaPamelahGabayan desu(I'm JoahnaPamelahGabayan).I've read your story & I wanna tell ya that it's freakin' awesome.The plot's amazing & I just wanna say that ya shouldn't be discouraged.Yer not a horrible writter.In fact,yer writtin's much more better than mine.Pls update soon.Can't wait ta read the next chapter.Ja ne.