@KinMafiaQueen its very good and well written, but maybe before you publish the new part you should read it over and fix the grammar and spelling mistakes as much as possible. and me and my cousin noticed that you would say something but then say the opposite like when you said 3 days till the gala, and then 2 days passed and it suddenly was in a week. so sometimes the logic is a bit messed up. but overall its very good and its one of my favs!! ♥️ (you asked for the honest opinion, im sorry if i offended you)