Jokes_onmi

Thank you to everyone who waited in anticipation of an update, and the steady readers that frequented the story, ATLA Little Bender! I'm well aware I've become the worst nightmare of a fanfic reader, The fanfic writer that disappears or announces hiatus, I hope to do a steady stream of updates! As a treat, the next chapters will be posted today following the Deserter Arc! Let me know what you all think, it's been a while since I've had the chance to return to Elaria, Enjoy!

Ciiedt

Welcome back !! ^__^
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trusfrated__army_

@Jokes_onmi EEEE you have no idea how happy I am rn like THANK YOU. Thank you for actually making a comeback!
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Jokes_onmi

Thank you to everyone who waited in anticipation of an update, and the steady readers that frequented the story, ATLA Little Bender! I'm well aware I've become the worst nightmare of a fanfic reader, The fanfic writer that disappears or announces hiatus, I hope to do a steady stream of updates! As a treat, the next chapters will be posted today following the Deserter Arc! Let me know what you all think, it's been a while since I've had the chance to return to Elaria, Enjoy!

Ciiedt

Welcome back !! ^__^
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trusfrated__army_

@Jokes_onmi EEEE you have no idea how happy I am rn like THANK YOU. Thank you for actually making a comeback!
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trusfrated__army_

Am I desperate for an update?Yes.
          Am I going to stop asking for an update?No
          I'm sorry if I come off annoying but the storyline is just so good I can't help but want more I want to see more of my girl elaria:⁠-⁠( 

trusfrated__army_

@Jokes_onmi O.M.G thank you sm and it's alright everyone has something going on in their life plus I'm just so glad you're planning on writing more I can't wait^⁠_⁠^ I'm sure it'll be a good one I have faith in you (⁠^⁠^⁠)
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Jokes_onmi

@trusfrated__army_  I never realized that this book was so loved! I'm sorry about not updating. Events distracted me from writing in general until months passed, and I never continued, I admire your persistence so much that I'll use it to motivate the next chapter. Hopefully, it's a good one! 
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trusfrated__army_

@trusfrated__army_ I meant *Regina Elaria :⁠^⁠) 
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trusfrated__army_

Ok ik I'm late but I just read you atla little bender and honestly it's such a master piece and Ik it's been 3 years but pleaseeeee don't abandon such a master piece i hope you come back soon to complete the book cuz it's like the best one I've ever read of atla. Praying hard for a comeback <3

Miuchann

@ trusfrated__army_  I pray with you!!!
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Bee_Rookie96

Hey I just wanted to inform you that in your ATLA little bender story at the end of chapter the winter solstice and only people those chapter cut off. It's really confusing when it does that because in the chapter it's confusing on what happened in the last chapter with Elaria. So, I feel like information in the story is missing and due to this error it's making the story confusing and not making sense. I hope that you'll edited soon because I really want to finish reading your story but can't because it's starting to be confusing with the errors. 

Jokes_onmi

Thanks for telling me, I’ve reread the both the chapters, if it helps I’d like to know whether there is confusion with the plot or with the structure of these two chapters: what I can say is that each chapter was structured closely to follow each episode aired- but with the best realistic addition that I can create of a new character with her own agenda. In demonstrating with the first arc of the story (before she joins the gaang) Elaria’s story/conflict doesn’t begin with meeting the group so those chapters were loose and shorter. Going deeper the chapters follow episode arcs (mini arcs for about two-three chapters in Little Bender) until the episode concludes and the mini arc is complete- so it is cutoff in a quick conclusion that remains ambiguous. I could have done day to day for Elaria but it’s to leave interpretation of what happens until a reality is set when Elaria’s journey ends or possibly begins a new story after the war. Should she live; As well as her standing in the world- if the world, angry at the fire nation, can accept Elaria by her actions or if it takes years. It can be really confusing (?_?)   I really hoped I helped and this wasn't alot to unload but if not bounce your opinions here so we can chat more on it! 
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